Friday, April 27, 2007

battle

like water on rocks
dark and light clash
like rocks on sand
they try to destroy each other
like sand on concrete
they reach a standstill
like water on sand
there is a victor

4 comments:

Garrett said...

Jessie, very creative, love the poem, great work

Your Teacher said...

like the rhythm of this. It reminds me of waves.

Jake said...

Good Poem. NIce Job.

LBH said...

This shows the true element of opposing styles "water-style." Nice Job, just capitalize the first letter in every line and you'll be fine.